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dan_plan's Avatar dan_plan dan_plan is offline
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Can you please review my software consultancy business homepage

Hi.

After launching Plancake.com, I have decided to entered also the software consultancy business.

Can you please have a look and let me know what you think?

http://www.danyukisoftware.com/

Thanks,
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Hi Dan,

The site is just as good as the plancake.com site.

Regards, Robert Campbell
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Hi Dan,

For what the site is promoting, I would say it is a very basic site, I assume this is a work in progress?

You are selling very design lead items, and this site is too simple for what you are selling. You need to be able to demonstrate your ability to do what you are selling, this site doesn't do this.

There are a few code errors, that should be corrected.
You haven't setup your doman correctly (duplicate content)
No Google analytics?
Your on page heading are a bit long
No robots.txt
No XML sitemap

I am sure taking the look of plancake into account it will look better soon.

I would have expected a better SEO optimised link from plancake to your new site.

I hope this is all of help.

Thanks
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Thanks guys for your feedback.

Thanks Stephen for your technical review - Google Analytics got lost between versions - great you pointed that out.
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Create a landline number for your mobile

Hey Entrepreneurs,

Our following website helps new businesses to setup landline numbers and divert these calls to their mobiles. It's value for money and helps you to project a more professional image. These can be used on business cards and other marketing materials.

We use it ourselves and it works really well.

Just use the form on the website to sign up and we will sort you out a number to divert.

www.BusinesstoMobile.co.uk

All the best,


Anthony
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Hi Dan, I would suggest that for business offering website, this is far too simple. It would work for a different kind of business though.
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