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17-12-2003, 11:39 AM

I'm new here, I would be grateful for your advice. I have written a Sales Letter but would like someone to take a look for corrections and suggestions. Do you offer this kind of service and help?

I know that first impression is a must hence I want to make sure this Sales letter has that impact.



Sarah Jones
18-12-2003, 11:24 AM
Hi Missy

I will be happy to look at it for you. If you reply with your email details then we can get in contact.

Look forward to hearing from you.

18-12-2003, 11:49 AM
Hi Missy,

If you have registered with Shell LiveWIRE, you will have access to all of the information within the Be Your Own Boss section. You should take a look at


To register at http://www.shell-livewire.org, choose 'Click to Register' below the briefcase on the left-hand side of the homepage.


Eve Clark
23-04-2004, 01:51 PM
Hi missy

If you want to send it over to me - I can have a look for you if you want.

Also, ask you friends and familys advice - see what they think.

As long as your letter is too long-winded, and to the point - I'm sure it is fine.



23-04-2004, 02:01 PM
Hi Missy,

It looks like quite a few people are happy to cast a glance over your letter!

If it's helpful, my website, www.pr4everyone.com has lots of free articles and advice re: direct mail. One article, which might be of particular interest, is about writing winning sales letters. Here's a direct link to the article:


I hope this helps,