Hello there

[Velvet Rising]

I'm not sure of the rules of the forum, so please if I make any glaring mistakes please let me know.

Firstly, Hello to you all - I briefly stopped in here before university and decided to go the academical route. For now, I am in the process of launching a new business.

My site for this new venture Velvet Rising, is just about finished (I'm making text changes tonight) and I would love your opinions on it please.

Hopefully I can return the favour to you guys when you are asking questions.

Velvet Rising

[level200]

Hi Velvet Rising

Welcome to the forum, I like your site apart from the white text on yellow background as it makes my eyes hurt.

Cheers
John

[Velvet Rising]

Thanks for the welcome john. I appreciate it

Thats the one part of the site I toiled with:

Consistency across the four boxes or not.

May make it a dark shade of grey.

:)

[impression-internet]

Hi Velvet Rising, welcome to the forum!

Nice site too :)

[Velvet Rising]

Hi Impression thanks for the welcome & the response to the site.

Truthfully I've been wanting to sign up here for weeks an show my work in progress site. I reluctantly declined until now, and I'm so glad I did.

I've just finished our first e-template also.

Aimed at the female marketing executives across the country (there's one for us blokes as well)

Can I ask if this is too riske or does it make us sound like a happy go lucky company.

Actually I hope a little of both

E-marketing Introductory email (http://velvetrising.co.uk/VelvetRising.html)